From: Tim Vaughan <plugd@thelambdalab.xyz>
Date: Fri, 29 May 2020 12:16:18 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: More wording updates.
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More wording updates.
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diff --git a/help.scm b/help.scm
index 991a71f..a54a839 100755
--- a/help.scm
+++ b/help.scm
@@ -9,10 +9,10 @@
         (begin
           (serve-document-header (ext->mime "gmi"))
           (print "# Caring for your plant\n\n"
-                 "Growing a healthy plant is a big job!  Here are the essential points:\n"
+                 "Growing a healthy plant is a big job!  Here are the important bits:\n"
                  "\n"
                  "* Water your seed at least once in the first 24hrs after planting.\n"
-                 "* Water your plants every day, otherwise its growth may be stunted.̱\n"
+                 "* To keep your plant growing nicely, be sure to water it every day.\n"
                  "* Important: Plants that are not watered for 5 days will die!\n"
                  "\n"
                  "Heed these rules and your plant will thrive!\n"