Cleaned up README.

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 # forth.jl
 
 A hobby implementation of a FORTH-like system atop the Julia scientific
 # forth.jl
 
 A hobby implementation of a FORTH-like system atop the Julia scientific

-computing language.  It will never be useful for any purpose besides, perhaps,
-pedagogical - although I wouldn't advise trying to learn forth by using this
-code directly. A better approach is to combine reading something like Leo Brodie's
-book Starting Forth with implementing your own forth.
-
-To a large degree this project is simply a port of the literate programming
-project JonesForth from x86 assembly + forth to julia + forth, although the
-mapping is in a few places non-trivial due to the fact that julia is a high
-level language.  A huge proportion (say 80%) of the library code in src/lib.4th
-is directly copied from JonesForth.  I've added some additional core definitions
-and modified some of the others to be a little bit closer to the behaviour of
-ANS forth (or at least FORTH 83).
+computing language.  It will almost certainly never be useful for any purpose
+besides, that which it has already fulfilled: forcing me to think quite
+carefully about how forth works. 
+
+This package owes a massive debt to the existence of the literate programming
+project [JonesForth] (https://rwmj.wordpress.com/2010/08/07/jonesforth-git-repository/),
+which I believe I've had more fun reading than any other piece of code. To a
+large degree my package is simply a port of that project from x86 assembly +
+forth to julia + forth, although the mapping is in a few places non-trivial due
+to the fact that julia is a high level language.  A huge proportion (say 80%)
+of the library code in src/lib.4th is directly copied from JonesForth.  (The
+fact that it was possible to reuse this code was satisfying in its own right!)
+I've added some additional core definitions and modified some of the others to
+be a little bit closer to the behaviour of ANS forth (or at least FORTH 83).

 
 There's quite a lot to say about the implementation, especially due to its
 high-level grounding, but that will have to wait for another time.
 
 There's quite a lot to say about the implementation, especially due to its
 high-level grounding, but that will have to wait for another time.


@@ -46,10 +48,10 @@ I've implemented the primitive word KEY.  Hopefully I'll be able to fix this
 in future.
 
 There's an example Mandelbrot Set drawing program included in the examples
 in future.
 
 There's an example Mandelbrot Set drawing program included in the examples

-directory.  To run it, you'll have to locate this directory on your system
-(its location depends on what OS you happen to be using).  Once found, use
-the "INCLUDE" word to compile its definitions. For example, on my system
-I can run the example in this way:
+directory.  To run it, you'll have to locate this directory on your system (its
+location depends on what OS you happen to be using and how julia is installed).
+Once found, use the "INCLUDE" word to compile its definitions. For example, on
+my system I can run the example in this way:

 
     include /home/tim/.julia/v0.4/forth/examples/mandelbrot.4th
     Enter 'mandel' to draw the Mandelbrot Set. ok
 
     include /home/tim/.julia/v0.4/forth/examples/mandelbrot.4th
     Enter 'mandel' to draw the Mandelbrot Set. ok